Wednesday, 7 December 2016

Superheroes! Narrative Plan


What was easy was to write the bad and minor people because it wasn't that hard to write the story but it was still good enough.

What I found hard was to write the Theme/Author's message because it was too hard for me but I wrote a theme message and an authors message as well what I also found hard was to write the middle of my story because I had to put my 20 super powers and I had to think of heaps of super powers.

What I can do better is to make more interesting details and have more than one idea in my story.

Friday, 18 November 2016



It was hard to think of questions to answer because I was doing the earthquakes by myself for this slide show.  It was tricky to work alone because it was hard to find information for the earthquakes but I got it finished in time.

Tuesday, 13 September 2016

My 3 Days In Room 23


What I found challenging was to do the Frozen coding because it was very hard because it was degrees. Then we had to make Elsa move 100 pixels forward and also make Anna make a line.

What I enjoyed was doing the pixel art because it got very cool but it was very hard for me because I was doing something big and it was Dead-pool and when I got better at it I did R2-D2 which was kind of hard, to you it might look easy but it was hard.  Then I did Pikachu which you think was easy and it was and I also liked to do was the coding because I finished doing the Star Wars coding and the Minecraft one as well and the Minecraft one was a little bit hard but the Star Wars one wasn't.

Monday, 29 August 2016


W.A.L.T  write a persuasive argument.


Well hello everybody I’m here to persuade you why smoking is bad for anyone’s health.

My first reason is that the smoke has about one thousand and two hundred chemicals in it and, is bad for your family.

My second reason is that whoever smokes it will decrease or reduce your lifespan by eleven minutes.  

My third reason is that if you smoke you will get things like: yellow teeth,  dry skin on your feet,  your hair constantly coming off,  and some extra worse things.

My fourth reason is that the smoking price goes up by ten dollars a year or an extra 10 percent a year and that’s good because then no one will want to buy it anymore.

Now I hope I have persuaded you why and how smoking is bad for your health.

Reflection: It was hard to find some ideas about my topic and to try and make my speech 2 minutes and 30 seconds,  3 minutes or 3 minutes and 30 seconds.

What I enjoyed about my speech is that right in the beginning I got heaps of ideas and that was a head start for me but it was hard to make the speech.  It took three days for me to figure out what to write for my speech.

What I have to improve on is to try and make it to two minutes and thirty seconds and also
I could improve on thinking for more ideas.

Monday, 16 May 2016

Zentangle Art

Zentangle Tree Art

I have been learning to create simple repeated patterns called zentangle art.

The Magical World

I am learning to write an imaginative adventure story.
I am so proud of adding detail into  my story to make it make sense.
It can be tricky to think about ideas to make my story better.
My co-pilot can help me with my story.
The next step for me in my learning might be to write a longer story in the 
correct time you are to do it in.
The next step for me in my learning might be to write another story with more detail in it.

Tuesday, 12 April 2016

Funny Science

I am learning to write a recount.
I am so proud of being able to putting all the details in.
It can be tricky to remember to add in all the punctuation.
My buddy can help me to write a recount.
The next step for me in my learning is to write a longer recount.

Mathletics Certificate

Thursday, 24 March 2016

What Is The Question ?

Maths Reflection

I am learning to recognize the effect of multiplying or dividing by 10, 100 and 1,000.
I am so proud of being able to know how to multiply and divide by 10, 100 and 1,000.
It can be tricky to multiply by 10, 100 and 1,000 and 10,000.
My buddy can help me with this task.
The next step for me in my learning is to try to do more of these questions and make them harder.

Monday, 21 March 2016

Past Tense Activity

I am learning to write in the past tense.
I am proud of myself that I know past tense
I found it tricky to find words that adds the double consonant at the back and add ‘ed’.
My buddy and my teacher can help me in my learning.
The next step for me in my learning is to learn more rules about vowels, and even more words that is hard.

Friday, 11 March 2016

Art - Using A Sketching Pencil

Sketching Skills

This Term in Art we have been learning to make our sketching pencil whisper, talk and shout.  We have also been learning to shade from dark to light and light to dark.

Leadership Presentation

I have been learning to research a leader and summarize information that I have read about them.
I am so proud of being able to write the main ideas from the information.
It can be tricky to find facts about who we are researching.
My Teacher can help me with this task.
The next step for me in my learning is to research someone else and summarize information about them.

Wednesday, 9 March 2016

Youth Town Sports - Term 1


Youth Town Sports

This Term we are working with Youth Town Sports.  We are focusing on teamwork, sportsmanship and making good decisions.   

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Year 6 Welcome Post

Welcome to Year 6.  My name is Ridwan and I am now in Room 21.  This year I am looking forward to making new friends and having fun in Room 21.  One of my goals for this year is to take on more responsibilities and to go out of my own comfort zone.  My responsibilities so far this year are being a reliable Peer mediator and an awesome Wet day Monitor.  I am enjoying being awesome,  playing cool games and only having only boys in the class room.